Peer edit

I also read Nick Hiracheta's rough draft

1. I think you could be much more detailed on the cat's appearences.

2. The lead is heart warming and made me want to hear the epic story of finding the perfect new cat.

3. The intro was descriptive, I could almost picture being at your aunt's house in Wisconsin because I have family there and i believe they also take in a few strays.

4. I would like to hear more about how this cat became so massive, I could only imagine the size of Godzilla's food dish.