Peer reviews

Paige
1.Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, she made it very clear she does not approve of the quality of the lunch food.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
yea i aggree that more kids will buy lunch of it tastes better so it will eliminate cost issues.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
yes, better food will cost more.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yes very interesting because I also feel the same way about the quality, I can't stand days when i'm hungry yet none of the food looks appetizing.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes they are.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes Paige had some very good ideas throughout the whole article.

7. Is the writing clear?
yes, very easy to read and follow the story the entire time.

Asad's review
1. Yes he is obviously intimidated by huge loans which we all should be, he wasn't saying don't take out loans, but make sure you will be able to pay off a massive loan due to over whealming interest costs.

2. Yes he made it clear that interest builds up fast, and the only solution is being well planned out.

3. Yeah.

4. very interesting because I know i will take out loans myself one day.

5. yes well organized it was easy to understand and follow the story.

6. yes and he also used real examples of people being overwhelmed by huge loans.

7. Asad's writting was crystal clear and well written.