Peer edit

I reviewed Asad's feature story about the fall of Barry Bonds.

1. You state that Bonds grew cocky of himself, I believe you should be more descriptive of what he said to reporters and fans.

2. I do not know any additional sources but the lead brought me and had me interested in hearing many different view points on Bonds.

3. Yes, you did a very good job creating an image in my mind of the game that he passed the single season home-run record, very descriptive and well detailed.

4. I would have liked to hear maybe one or two more view points on Bonds.